Not bad!, although the animation and art could be better, i can respect this!
Thanks! :3 I like the first few segments the most
Really enjoyed this.
Me encantó! muy creativo.
I loved it!, really creative.
Really smooth animation.
The one problem is that the proportions aren't consistent, the heads sometimes shrink and sometimes grow too big.
Aside from that, good work!
Nice art! really looking like (If not better hoohoo) than the new series.
hahaha probably the reason is becase i have all the time i need to polish the animation, and the studio only have a week which is insane :O
My main problem with this would be that the animation (And overall art) looks just cheap, but i guess it's fine for a first project, you just need to work on your art (and i mean, you REALLY need to work on your art)
The voice acting was okay, it's not a profesional project so it works.
The joke was nice too, a simple yet effective critic on the system, i wouldn't know how accurate it was, but was kinda funny nonetheless.
Try to improve on your work :)
Thanks man. I always love to of mine. see reviews. Of course the art is really bad but it was on old project of mine.
Look, the animation is sometimes bad and sometimes good (That red rat's animation was smooth and well done, but the character animation, when there was character animation, it didn't look as good), you need to find a balance on that.
Also try to clean up the characters, those lines look really sketchy, but then again, maybe that's what you're going for.
The backgrounds are also sometimes good and sometimes bad, for example, the wide natural backgrounds you made there, in the snow, the city, those are easy to watch and quite nice, but then you have those indoors, kinda feels rushed towards the end.
Also, go easy on those sound effects, a common mistake is that animators usually over use those cartoonish sound effects, those boings, those flashing effects, it's distracting and they don't sound good nor profesional.
There's room for improve here and i'm sure you can do better with your character, i'm looking foward to see you grow on this.
The animation looks cheap and kinda creepy, you should really work on that, also the sound design was sometimes too loud or too quiet, without a proper balance, the audio quality and the voice acting was actually okay, if anything a bit boring.
Remember that your animation shouldn't be hard to watch, we should enjoy how your work looks, i'm sure you can do better, improve on your overall quality and you will make this or any idea work.
The music was nice.
get fucked dude. Your work is so shit. Don't give advice until you get at least watchable you weeby faggot.
Also, the audio sits at -6 dbs the whole time. I know you don't know shit about audio, but that means its not getting louder or quieter.
Woah!, nice animation, so stylish!
The animation mixed with the music gives a chill vibe, and i really enjoyed it.
Nice work, that was some good 3D modeling and a good use of the camera.
The audio could use some work, as in, the sound effects of, for example, the phone flying away, the body muting, the voice acting, all that seems a bit too loud for the circumstances the characters are in, for example, if the character is on the wing of the plane, the sound of the wind should be way louder than the phone flying away or the character screaming, i'd recommend using simple microphone tricks to accomplish that sound, you can always blow into your own microphone, see how that sounds and compare.
But overall, this was a nice movie and i'll be watching the rest of the episodes, hope to see you improve!
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